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di pintu langit

Jun 12, '08 5:07 AM
for everyone

di pintu taman
aku menantimu
melambai kangen ke arahmu
namun kau seakan tidak melihatku
ada apa denganmu ?

pintu hatiku telah terbuka
kini ku rasa dia berbeda
ingin ku miliki dia

di pintu langit
aku menjerit
tercabik sakit
perih melilit-lilit
menanti senja tiba
sejenak mengurai udara
-ku hirup

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12 CommentsChronological Reverse Threaded

ekohm wrote on Jun 12

ah pulang...

jengdyanee wrote on Jun 12

loh..piye toh? sing dienteni rung teko kok malah mulih....hahaha...nungguin sapa Ko di pintu langit?

aidavyasa wrote on Jun 12

Bunuuuh

percikhati wrote on Jun 12

sabar ya,,

percikhati wrote on Jun 12

patah hati emang menyakitkan,,,
hehe..sotoy bgt gw,,

ekohm wrote on Jun 12

jengdyanee said

loh..piye toh? sing dienteni rung teko kok malah mulih....hahaha...nungguin sapa Ko di pintu langit?

i'm back

ekohm wrote on Jun 12

Bunuuuh

wew....

ekohm wrote on Jun 12

percikhati said

sabar ya,,

ya sabar....

jengdyanee wrote on Jun 12

ekohm said

i'm back

welcome back....heheh...

ekohm wrote on Jun 12

percikhati said

patah hati emang menyakitkan,,,
hehe..sotoy bgt gw,,

pengen makan soto nih....

irmaandmangotree wrote on Jun 12

ekohm said

namun kau seakan tidak melihatku
ada apa denganmu ?

maaf lagi gak pake kacamata.. hahahaha!!!!!!!!!!

ekohm wrote on Jun 13

irmaandmangotree said

maaf lagi gak pake kacamata.. hahahaha!!!!!!!!!!

weleh....pan aku yg bawain kacamatamuh....

kekekkekeek......

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